Resources on Avoiding Plagiarism
Department of Political Science
Concordia University


III. How Not to Plagiarize
B. Types and Examples of Plagiarism

Type 3: The "Apt Phrase"
If you use an author's original and distinctive term or phrase without citation, it is plagiarism.

Example 1: Phrase

Original Source
[Preparations for war] tended, indeed, to promote territorial consolidation, centralization, differentiation in the instruments of government, and monopolization of the means of coercion, all the fundamental state-making processes. War made the state and the state made war.

[From: Charles Tilly, "Reflections on the History of European State-Making," in Charles Tilly, ed., The Formation of National States in Western Europe (Princeton, NJ: Princeton Univ. Press, 1975), 42.]

Plagiarism
Historically, war-making and state-building have been closely interrelated: War made the state and the state made war.

Proper Acknowledgement
Historically, war-making and state-building have been closely interrelated. In Charles Tilly's famous phrase, "War made the state and the state made war."1

1Charles Tilly, "Reflections on the History of European State-Making," in Charles Tilly, ed.,  The Formation of National States in Western Europe (Princeton, NJ: Princeton University Press, 1975), 42.

Example 2: Single Word
Using even a single word without acknowledgement can be "apt phrase" plagiarism, if the word was coined by the source from which is taken.

Original Source
The post-cold war world has seen the rise of an increasing number of regimes that cannot be easily classified as either authoritarian or democratic, but display some characteristics of each--in short, they are semi-authoritarian regimes...In choosing the term semi-authoritarian, we are not seeking to engage in a semantic discussion, but to highlight what we view as the defining characteristic of these regimes: the existence and persistence of mechanisms that effectively prevent the transfer of power through elections from the hands of the incumbent leaders or party to a new political elite or political organization. [From: Matha Brill Olcott and Marina Ottaway, The Challenge of Semi-Authoritarianism, Carnegie Paper No. 7 (Washington, DC: Carnegie Endowment for International Peace, 1999). http://carnegieendowment.org/1999/10/01/challenge-of-semi-authoritarianism.]

Plagiarism
Some regimes combine elements of democracy and authoritarianism and are therefore semi-authoritarian.

Proper Acknowledgement
Some regimes, which Olcott and Ottaway (1999) have termed "semi-authoritarian," combine elements of democracy and authoritarianism.



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